I saw your post that you wanted feedback, so I'll just note what I noticed here. Mostly editorial stuff that I think could help. Some might be just my opinion.
-consecuences (spelling)
-Good luck username (I would have a comma between Good luck and the username)
-Confront the wolves. -Flee in the opposite direction
(Some of your passage links have periods and some don't. You should choose one and be consistent.)
-I trained relentlessly from that instant, shedding tears, blood, and enduring pain, but I never stopped my training. (I would make this two sentences)
-You have Died/You have died (I wouldn't capitalize Died. And I saw two instances of this. Once it was capitalized, once it was not.)
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I saw your post that you wanted feedback, so I'll just note what I noticed here. Mostly editorial stuff that I think could help. Some might be just my opinion.
-consecuences (spelling)
-Good luck username (I would have a comma between Good luck and the username)
-Confront the wolves.
-Flee in the opposite direction
(Some of your passage links have periods and some don't. You should choose one and be consistent.)
-I trained relentlessly from that instant, shedding tears, blood, and enduring pain, but I never stopped my training. (I would make this two sentences)
-You have Died/You have died (I wouldn't capitalize Died. And I saw two instances of this. Once it was capitalized, once it was not.)
Thank you very much! I will be looking into this